For this essay, my main goal(s) are to be able to have a good, strong thesis and give enough background to introduce my quotes. I tend to struggle with my thesis and claims and connecting them so I hope to become stronger at doing that. In order to achieve these goals I am going to ask other people other than my peers in class to review my essay. For instance, my writing lab teacher and Professor Emerson because I feel like the more people read over my essay the more mistakes I can catch them and fix it. My biggest challenge not only in this essay , but in any big piece of writing I do is always gonna be creating a thesis. I always struggle with making a clear, concise, working thesis so I hope to change that in this last paper. If there’s a problem that’s too difficult to solve on my own I will reach other to my other sources who are also deal with essay.